Thread: Please check the translation of this little story.

Mr. McGee, I am going to be frank. I find it extremely impertinent of you to try to 'improve' someone else's story in such a way, not to mention somewhat childish. And then to ask native speakers to correct YOUR version. Well! You are free to write as many of your own stories as you like; I would appreciate it, however, if you leave mine alone. I cannot force you, but I would also respectfully request that in future you refrain from contributing to any threads that I might start. And it is not that I am sensitive to criticism; when I require such, I will seek it from people whose opinion I value. Thank you.

Originally Posted by Martin Miles

Mr. McGee, I am going to be frank. I find it extremely impertinent of you to try to 'improve' someone else's story in such a way, not to mention somewhat childish. And then to ask native speakers to correct YOUR version. Well! You are free to write as many of your own stories as you like; I would appreciate it, however, if you leave mine alone. I cannot force you, but I would also respectfully request that in future you refrain from contributing to any threads that I might start. And it is not that I am sensitive to criticism; when I require such, I will seek it from people whose opinion I value. Thank you.

Да нет -- спасибо Вам, Мартину, за откровенность; ведь она освежает душу, и жаль что в этом мире такое качество редко встречается! Естественно, я покорно извиняюсь, сэр, и прошу Вашего прощения за то, что мои бесплатные услуги получилось неудовлетворительно...



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