Quote Originally Posted by Vladimir_S View Post
Вот мой перевод песни "Случайный вальс":
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Good job! I made a few corrections to the English:

The night is short,
Clouds are sleeping,
Your unfamiliar hand,
Lies at in my palm.

After the alarms
The town is sleeping.
I heard a waltz melody
And dropped in here for hour or so.

Though I`m almost unfamiliar with you
And my house is far from here,
I feel as if I`m again
At the home bank.
We are dancing together,
In this empty hall,
So tell me just a word,
But I don't know what about.

We will whirl around,
Sing and be friends.
I absolutely lost the skill of dancing,
And ask you to excuse me.
Morning is calling,
Again in a Back to the campaign.
Leaving your town,
I will pass by your gate.