Thread: help me pls to translate in English this text

это было связано с тем, что риски заключения непрозрачных сделок, по которым не дается достаточного обоснования и которые заключаются вопреки желанию миноритариев, уже были учтены в рейтинге корпоративного управления компаний

Here's my stab:
This was connected with the fact that the risks of making non-transparent deals, which are not sufficiently substantiated and which are made contrary to minoritarians' (?) wish, were already included in the rating of the corporate management of the companies.

Corrections appreciated.

Originally Posted by tushkanchik

это было связано с тем, что риски заключения непрозрачных сделок, по которым не дается достаточного обоснования и которые заключаются вопреки желанию миноритариев, уже были учтены в рейтинге корпоративного управления компаний

This was related to the fact that the companies's corporate management rating had already considered the risks of non-transparent transactions, which are not substantiated sufficiently and are being conducted contrary to the wishes of minority shareholders.

Более точный перевод могу дать исходя из контекста. В данном случае есть ньюансы, которые я, возможно, не передал.

this is related to the fact that the corporate rating of the mangement of these companies had already taken into account the risks of non-transparent deals, entered into without sufficient bases and against the will of the minority shareholders.

Originally Posted by begemot

this is related to the fact that the corporate rating of the mangement of these companies had already taken into account the risks of non-transparent deals, entered into without sufficient bases and against the will of the minority shareholders.

We don't know whether those companies entered the deals or not (your translation hints that they did). Plus, we don't know whether the companies were mentioned before to refer to them as "these companies". These are the context sensitive nuances I was talking about.

thanks dear all, i really apreciate your kind respond

I often can translate связано с тем, что as simply "because." "connected with the fact that" is more awkward.