There is no need to mention anything to use свой. Свой only means that an action taker affects something of their own. To clarify that maze of a sentence:Originally Posted by grafrich
Она ищет свои очки - She's looking for her (own) glasses.
Она ищет её очки - She's looking for some other girl's glasses.
Он любит свою жену - He loves his wife
Он любит его жену - He loves other man's wife
This is what свой is all about.
That gives me a funny picture of your cat sleeping on his head with its rear legs up, I mean the Russian phrase. I guess you meant на спине with all its 4 legs up.Originally Posted by grafrich
Ходили is for a routine action that happened a lot of times in the past. Like a habit. We have an ongoing action in the past there, therefore it must be "шли" instead. Also the sentence is worded badly, sorry. You have connected шли за покупками and а сынок устал very strangely.Originally Posted by Serge_spb
Маша и её сын Саша шли (пешком - redundant really) за покупками, и тут (then) Саша устал. Сейчас and past tense doesn't work well together, generally.
This is very very weird. Кроссовки are a thing, they don't go on their own I suggest:Originally Posted by Serge_spb
Как-то удивленно смотря в пол на свои кроссовки, Саша думал об этом.
Originally Posted by Serge_spbСаша посмотрел вокруг/по сторонам, Саша осмотрелся - увидеть вокруг себя is very weird.Originally Posted by grafrich
Саша посмотрел вокруг. Слева - шумные птицы, тишина и млекопитающие. Still a little strange as млекопитающие doesn't fit in that list really, IMO.
Grammatically - несколько мометов. But we don't really use момент in such cases as British do. I suggest you substitite it with секунд - несколько секунд... Ему must be нему there.Originally Posted by Serge_spb
A few notes: I kind of don't really grasp all of the story. You have 3 people in it. Mom - Masha, her son - Sasha, saleswoman - Alina. Right? Saleswoman seems to think that the pair, Masha and Sasha, that went into her shop is her manager and her DAUGHTER? I mean I'm totally lost from that point on.
P.S. I'll get back to the rest of the story later if no one else has corrected it by that time.