Может, я люблю русский язык… Потому что мне нравится читать. мне нравится русский язык… Что он очень светлый и мягкий.
Second and forth sentences are inappropriate and gramatically incorrect in russian. Probably, in some artistic text they can exist, but author really shouldn't try going artistic when he (or she) is just learning.

Other than that it's good. Few obvious typos.