Please check for mistakes, any stylistic mistakes or anything that doesn't sound right. I'm really eager to get accpeted for the course, and would be really greatful for any suggestion and correction.

The reason why I have decided to apply for admission to the English language course offered by the Perth College is because it is an incredible chance to master my English. Apart from that, it would be a great opportunity to become more familiar with the Celtic culture and customs that I happen to find enormously interesting. I am a second year student of apllied linguistics in B., Poland. I have proved to be a very hardworking and dedicated person, I am most interested in movies and politics. As far as my work experience is concerned, I held the job of a translator during the annual music festival in B. in 2006, prior to this, I used to work as a volounteer with mentally challenged children.


Thank you in advance.