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    Could somebody help me translate a short song verse? :)

    Привет!

    I just wanted to know if anyone would help me translate this verse from a song into Russian lyrics!

    "Sky, far away sky
    A murmured voice
    Your dream
    now turns the wheel of the stars

    I felt like
    I would never be anywhere,
    until I felt your eyes on me.

    There is but one eclipsed moon
    in the corner of my heart...
    may it shine enough
    to light up whatever narrow path you take."
    Мне нужно практиковаться в русском!

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    Re: Could somebody help me translate a short song verse? :)

    Небо, далекое небо
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    Твой сон
    Теперь крутит колесо звёзд

    Я почувствовал, что
    Не смогу быть нигде,
    Пока не почувствую твой взгляд.

    В уголке моего сердца
    Лишь затменная луна... (Не знаю как это сказать. Луна при затмении? Луна в затмении? Луна, подвергнутая затмению)
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    =D

    Thanks so much Wanja!

    I really appreciate this!
    Мне нужно практиковаться в русском!

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    Re: Could somebody help me translate a short song verse? :)

    Quote Originally Posted by wanja
    Небо, далекое небо
    Лишь затменная луна... (Не знаю как это сказать. Луна при затмении? Луна в затмении? Луна, подвергнутая затмению)
    я бы добавил "одна"
    "лишь одна затменная луна"
    Hei, rett norsken min og du er død.
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    Trusnse kal'rt eturule sikay!!! ))

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    Did you write those lyrics yourself? They are rubbish, they don't even rhyme and are super cheesy. If a man wrote lyrics like that for me I'd dump him.
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    Lyrics

    HAHAHAHAHA! No I didn't write the lyrics. This song is originally from a Japanese animated cartoon called "Outlaw Star," and was also originally sung in Japanese. I found someone make their own version of the song but in Spanish. It sounded pretty, so I was curious what the lyrics would be in Russian.

    But yeah, I would have to agree with you there. Most animated cartoon songs are pure cheese!
    Мне нужно практиковаться в русском!

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    Re: Lyrics

    Quote Originally Posted by Ширин
    HAHAHAHAHA! No I didn't write the lyrics. This song is originally from a Japanese animated cartoon called "Outlaw Star," and was also originally sung in Japanese. I found someone make their own version of the song but in Spanish. It sounded pretty, so I was curious what the lyrics would be in Russian.

    But yeah, I would have to agree with you there. Most animated cartoon songs are pure cheese!
    That's OK then.
    Ingenting kan stoppa mig
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    Re: Could somebody help me translate a short song verse? :)

    Quote Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie
    Quote Originally Posted by wanja
    Небо, далекое небо
    Лишь затменная луна... (Не знаю как это сказать. Луна при затмении? Луна в затмении? Луна, подвергнутая затмению)
    я бы добавил "одна"
    "лишь одна затменная луна"
    "Затемнённая луна" better
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    No, "затменная" seems more poetic.
    «И всё, что сейчас происходит внутре — тоже является частью вселенной».

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