Thread: Could somebody help me translate a short song verse? :)

Привет!

I just wanted to know if anyone would help me translate this verse from a song into Russian lyrics!

"Sky, far away sky
A murmured voice
Your dream
now turns the wheel of the stars

I felt like
I would never be anywhere,
until I felt your eyes on me.

There is but one eclipsed moon
in the corner of my heart...
may it shine enough
to light up whatever narrow path you take."

Небо, далекое небо
Шепчуший голос
Твой сон
Теперь крутит колесо звёзд

Я почувствовал, что
Не смогу быть нигде,
Пока не почувствую твой взгляд.

В уголке моего сердца
Лишь затменная луна... (Не знаю как это сказать. Луна при затмении? Луна в затмении? Луна, подвергнутая затмению)
Пусть ее света хватит, чтобы
Осветить путь, которым ты пойдёшь, насколько бы узок он ни был.

Thanks so much Wanja!

I really appreciate this!

Originally Posted by wanja

Небо, далекое небо
Лишь затменная луна... (Не знаю как это сказать. Луна при затмении? Луна в затмении? Луна, подвергнутая затмению)

я бы добавил "одна"
"лишь одна затменная луна"

Did you write those lyrics yourself? They are rubbish, they don't even rhyme and are super cheesy. If a man wrote lyrics like that for me I'd dump him.

HAHAHAHAHA! No I didn't write the lyrics. This song is originally from a Japanese animated cartoon called "Outlaw Star," and was also originally sung in Japanese. I found someone make their own version of the song but in Spanish. It sounded pretty, so I was curious what the lyrics would be in Russian.

But yeah, I would have to agree with you there. Most animated cartoon songs are pure cheese!

Originally Posted by Ширин

HAHAHAHAHA! No I didn't write the lyrics. This song is originally from a Japanese animated cartoon called "Outlaw Star," and was also originally sung in Japanese. I found someone make their own version of the song but in Spanish. It sounded pretty, so I was curious what the lyrics would be in Russian.

But yeah, I would have to agree with you there. Most animated cartoon songs are pure cheese!

That's OK then.

Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie

Originally Posted by wanja

Небо, далекое небо
Лишь затменная луна... (Не знаю как это сказать. Луна при затмении? Луна в затмении? Луна, подвергнутая затмению)

я бы добавил "одна"
"лишь одна затменная луна"

"Затемнённая луна" better

No, "затменная" seems more poetic.