Thread: Please check the text in English.

Originally Posted by maxitron

Thank you all for your answers.
Yes, it's preparation for the IELTS exam.
I had to write an essay and to bring in my own examples.
For me, it's hard as when I wrote it I then only was only able to write in Russian at school wrote , and then not very well.
Once again, thank you all and I will rewrite your text.

just a few corrections