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    Check this text please ) I think here are grammar or stilistic errors..

    Computer Programmer. Responsible for converting project specifications and statements of problems and procedures to detailed logical flow charts for coding. Responsible for the overseeing the physical design and management of the bank's databases and for evaluating, selecting, implementing, and monitoring a Database Management System. I have a lot of working experience at banks. I know banking processes and methods in different banking areas. I worked with different complicated banking systems.
    Capable to work as Management Information Systems specialist, who develops and maintains a comprehensive database as Data Warehouses of a huge size (dozens Terrabytes) and a variety of Datamarts for use in Retail Risk Department of a Bank. I use MSSQL Server as primary product and other software and development tools as secondary products. Create special reports like vintages, balances, PNL, cashflow. Use mathematical formulas, programming languages for creating scorecards for clients behavior forecasting.
    Programming languages: SQL, Java, Delphi, XML, HTML, C++, C#
    Products: Microsoft Office, MS SQL, DB2, Oracle, Mathcad, SAS, Informatica
    Please, can You correct, if I have made mistakes.

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    small changes; I removed all of that capitalization.

    Quote Originally Posted by Julienovich View Post
    Computer Programmer. Responsible for converting project specifications and statements of problems and procedures to detailed logical flow charts for coding. Responsible for overseeing the physical design and management of a bank's databases and for evaluating, selecting, implementing, and monitoring a database management system. I have a lot of work experience in banks. I know banking processes and methods in different banking areas. I worked with different complicated banking systems.
    Capable of working as a management information systems specialist, who develops and maintains a comprehensive database of huge data warehouses (dozens of terrabytes) and a variety of datamarts for use in the retail risk department of a bank. I use MSSQL Server as a primary product and other software and development tools as secondary products. I can create special reports like vintages, balances, PNL, cashflow. Able to use mathematical formulas and programming languages for creating scorecards for a client's behavior forecasting.
    Programming languages: SQL, Java, Delphi, XML, HTML, C++, C#
    Products: Microsoft Office, MS SQL, DB2, Oracle, Mathcad, SAS, Informatica
    Кому - нары, кому - Канары.

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    The word is terabyte with a single r.
    Спасибо за исправления!

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    Yes! Yanks a lot!! )))
    Please, can You correct, if I have made mistakes.

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