Quote Originally Posted by kwatts59
Quote Originally Posted by BlackMage
I want to tell you about the Linux operating system. It's my current operating system and I surely haven't seen anything better!
There are no grammer erros and it sounds ok, but I think stylistically it would be a little bit better to say the following:

Introduction.

I currently use Linux as my operating system and I have to say that I surely have not seen anything better!
Well, I think this introduction sucks. I mean, you should introduce what you are going to talk about, not make a statement saying it is great!

Something like (and this comes from years of writing memos)

This paper (report) explains the reasons why I chose the Linux operating system, which is my current opertaing system and, in my opinion, the best operating system out there. The paper (report) is divided into three parts:

1. etc.
2. etc.
3. etc.