haha,Originally Posted by Layne
now, with the story, it was good to what I saw, and I'm not going to quote the corrections ( ) But all that was left out was 'Marlboro Lights', I'd just say cigarettes.
(that should be written "perhaps you need a semi-colon rather than a comma."perhaps you needs a semi-colon rather than a comma.
And only old men and women (grandmas and grandpas mainly) say 'young lady'