Quote Originally Posted by Layne
American girls object to everything men say unless its "I have money".
haha,

now, with the story, it was good to what I saw, and I'm not going to quote the corrections ( ) But all that was left out was 'Marlboro Lights', I'd just say cigarettes.

perhaps you needs a semi-colon rather than a comma.
(that should be written "perhaps you need a semi-colon rather than a comma."

And only old men and women (grandmas and grandpas mainly) say 'young lady'