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The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store.
Я так думаю.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling.
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The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead.
Заранее благодарю всех за исправление ошибок в моём русском.
Barmaley, this topic is only for Russian speakers learning English. Read the disclaimer!Our job here is to correct their grammar!
http://masterrussian.net/mforum/viewtopic.php?t=9200
"The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling."
ребята, смысль немножко не та. "Утро было облачное когда он закрыл дверь и пошел в книжный магазин по обычнам путям. дождь идет." ? Может быть лучше "The morning was cloudy, he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It started to drizzle"...
Hei, rett norsken min og du er død.
I am a notourriouse misspeller. Be easy on me.
Пожалуйста! Исправляйте мои глупые ошибки (но оставьте умные)!
Yo hablo español mejor que tú.
Trusnse kal'rt eturule sikay!!!))
That's the problem with doing the disclaimer on a third thread! I didn't read it until AFTER I posted!Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie
Barmaley, this topic is only for Russian speakers learning English. Read the disclaimer!
http://masterrussian.net/mforum/viewtopic.php?t=9200
"The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling."
ребята, смысль немножко не та. "Утро было облачное когда он закрыл дверь и пошел в книжный магазин по обычнам путям. дождь идет." ? Может быть лучше "The morning was cloudy, he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It started to drizzle"...
Заранее благодарю всех за исправление ошибок в моём русском.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work.
The bear looked at the car, and reflections of fire danced in his eyes. He knew what to do.
kalinka_vinnie
i was mistaken i want to say this "It started to drizzle" thx a lot))
Придёт весна и мы раскроем окна..
Айда на встречу друг другу!
Придёт весна и яркое солнце
Растопит лёд старых обид глупых.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange think came to his mind
exactly in the book store.
I'm sorry
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It was drizzling. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange think came to his mind exactly in the book store.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange think came to his mind exactly in the book store. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back.
Я так думаю.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange think came to his mind exactly in the book store. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back. He turned round and couldn't believe his eyes. It was his father he hadn't seen for ages!
Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work.
Suggestions for this sentence:
Suddenly he remembered, that today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work.
Suddenly he remembered, what today is. It is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work.
Scott
Maybe: Suddenly he remembered, what today was. It was FRIDAY
Remember that you can write only ONE phrase per turn!
Remember to let two other people write two phrases after you!
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Я так думаю.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the book store. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered, what today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange think came to his mind exactly in the book store. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back. He turned round and couldn't believe his eyes. It was his father he hadn't seen for ages!
"Dimitry, my son!"-the old man cryed.
The bear looked at the car, and reflections of fire danced in his eyes. He knew what to do.
"Suddenly he remembered that it was Friday" - I think that's the way to get this idea across.
OK OK TIME OUT! Let's fix this before going on, allrighty?
Hehe, doorbells ringing in bookstores?
--- here is the uncolored version:
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the bookstore. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered that today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange thought had come to his mind exactly in the bookstore. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back. He turned round and couldn't believe his eyes. It was his father he hadn't seen for ages!
"Dimitry, my son!"-the old man cried.
Hei, rett norsken min og du er død.
I am a notourriouse misspeller. Be easy on me.
Пожалуйста! Исправляйте мои глупые ошибки (но оставьте умные)!
Yo hablo español mejor que tú.
Trusnse kal'rt eturule sikay!!!
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the bookstore. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered that today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange thought had come to his mind so suddenly in the bookstore. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back. He turned round and couldn't believe his eyes. It was his father he hadn't seen for ages!
"Dimitry, my son!"-the old man cried.
"Had come to his mind exactly in the bookstore" sounds awkward. Other possible variations that sound better (other than the one above):
"...had come to his mind in the bookstore"
"...had come to his mind right there in the bookstore"
"...had come to his mind upon entering the bookstore"
I dunno, i'm sure the list is endless...
tdk
ok - let's take this one. Please somebody continue.The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the bookstore. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered that today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange thought had come to his mind so suddenly in the bookstore. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back. He turned round and couldn't believe his eyes. It was his father he hadn't seen for ages!
"Dimitry, my son!"-the old man cried.
Я так думаю.
The morning was cloudy when he locked the door and went by his usual way to the bookstore. It started to drizzle. Unfortunately, "it" wasn't the clouds, but a dog standing on the roof overhead. Suddenly he remembered that today is FRIDAY, and decided to drink some beer after work. He couldn't explain why such a strange thought had come to his mind so suddenly in the bookstore. He stood in the middle of the store, gazing at the shelves when the door bell rang behind his back. He turned round and couldn't believe his eyes. It was his father he hadn't seen for ages!
"Dimitry, my son!"-the old man cried. His face was wet with tears of joy.
Придёт весна и мы раскроем окна..
Айда на встречу друг другу!
Придёт весна и яркое солнце
Растопит лёд старых обид глупых.
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