Quote Originally Posted by Fester View Post
I think it looke like you have just translated it word by word from a dictionary. You can't do that when learning languages, especially not in russian where the grammar is really heavy. You need to study grammar a lot before you try to put together your own sentences, and if you're studying all by yourself I'ts not going to be easier to learn.

I reccomend starting with cases, because they tell what function a word has in a sentence, and to me, as a student of russian this looks almost like random jibberish

Thanks Paul and Fester. I'm familiar with cases, and thought I was using them properly. Apparently I wasn't I have charts for declension, but perhaps I still think in English, and not in Russian. Perhaps here I can practice and learn; for instance, here is what I wrote in reply in Russian. Give me some pointers on how I would improve it:

Согласно, а я покоряю для исправлеия! Я покорный студент разговоривания. Пожалуйста, исправляете. Действительно у меня учебника и тоже есть интернет. Тот куда я почитаю рассказ (Сетевая словесность. Современная русская литература в Интернете). Здесь в форуме имею надежды упражнять...