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    -- Part 3
    В скором времени я надеюсь закончить некоторое количество пейзажей, так как я предпочитаю сейчас рисовать деревья, а не людей. Они сидят неподвижно дольше [долго могут оставаться неподвижными], и мне не нужно их оплачивать им не надо платить, и к тому же сейчас больше люди покупают пейзажи охотнее, чем обнаженные портреты.

    I hope it's clear that "Я посещал и рисовал ... " would require
    "Это внушило меня сделать выставку..." , (if внушать was a proper verb), because the act of внушение only occurred once, hence the perfective aspect is necessary
    "Невозможно передать смысл иностранной фразы, не разрушив при этом её первоначальную структуру."

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    Quote Originally Posted by maxmixiv View Post
    I hope it's clear that "Я посещал и рисовал ... " would require
    "Это внушило меня сделать выставку..." , (if внушать was a proper verb), because the act of внушение only occurred once, hence the perfective aspect is necessary
    Thanks for going through that, it all makes sense, and as ever I missed a few mistakes that are obvious in hindsight. Mostly mis-gendering nouns it seems.

    As far as I can tell, внушать/внушить are proper verbs. Or at least according to this, anyway:-
    https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/внушать

    I'm pretty satisfied with the resulting text, always grateful for someone checking my efforts, perhaps some day I'll know enough to be able to contribute here. That would an acheivement!

    R

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