Quote Originally Posted by kwatts59
Is there anyone else who can find any more mistakes on these most recent verses? Or is everything completely correct?

What does this mean?
Эх, как бы жили-поживали

Any help would be appreciated.

Ok, here are few more corrections:

Эх, как бы жили-поживали
Huh, how <good> would we live than!

Ох, достали! —
Oh, you've finally annoyed me to death!

Поскакали!
Let's gallop!