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Well, now that man had stolen a fairly large sum of cash, he was faced with a new dilemmna. What should he spend it on? First he thought he would spend it on a...

Well, now that man had stolen a fairly large sum of cash, he had been faced with the new dilemmna. What should he spend it in? First he thought he would spend it for a bandly new convertionable car,...

Можно использовать это грамматическое время но не звучит.

Следующая история через несколько минут....... :o

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It's was a dark gloomy night on the beach. A storm was brewing overhead and the wind was howling through the trees. Suddenly, a man who wore/wearing a black balaclava on his head...

Chuvak:

It was a dark and gloomy night on the beach. A storm was brewing overhead and the wind was howling in the trees. Suddenly, a man who wore/wearing a black balaclava on his head stepped out...

It's a kind of ironic phrase.

Of all the places in the world it could have been, it just happened to be a desert.

This is ironic because a desert is where you expect to find a cactus.
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It's was the dark and gloomy night on the beach. A storm was brewing overhead and howling was the wind through the trees. Suddenly, a man which wore a black balaclava over his...

правильно? :)

1. Однако, смерть преподавателя не успокоила нашего бесстрашного искателя приключений. 2. Осознав, что теперь он не только драчун и еще и убийца (что, согласитесь, далеко не одно и тоже), мужик...

Very good.

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Note, there were somethings you changed which were not incorrect to start with, or that you changed in an way I didn't expect. The way you said is correct too though.
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After this nonfortunate even, the man decided that he oughted to change his way. So he goed to a anger manajment class inorder to learn how to restrain the burning rage which would...

Lol, now I give up. :D

That's f**cken awesome! F**ken good job mate! (I think those were typos) :lol: :lol: :D

Wow, this looks hard. My attempt:

Here is what I had in mind at the beginning.



Now your version.



Your version is actually better than my original.
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No! Lol. The word "retarded" can be offensive to some people.

In the text there are some things which you missed, but not all of them are grammatically incorrect (probably), but rather they sound...

It sounds like something a person with severe mental disabilities would say. It might be offensive to certain sensitive politically correct people.

Quite well but there are a few more mistakes in there. Some are not technically mistakes but sound retarded. Have another look.

I'm not sure I get it. I am a native English speaker and I write a message in English with deliberate mistakes and the Russians must try to correct it, is that what you mean?

Ok

Once apon a...