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Quote Originally Posted by Chuvak
Well, after stealing a fairly large sum of money he was faced with a new dilemma: what should he spend it on. First he thought he could spend it for (or on) a brand new convertible car, but then he thought twice and resolved to save (spare) it for his retirement. So off he went to the bank where he planned to create a new account in which to put his cash. Unfortunately, the bank happened to be closed, so he had to return another day.
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Well, now that man had stolen a fairly large sum of cash, he was faced with a new dilemmna. What should he spend it on? First he thought he would spend it on a brand new convertible car, but then he thought twice, and resolved to save it for his retirement. So off he when to the bank where he planned to create a new account in which to stash his cash. Unfortunately, the bank happened to be closed so hehad to return on a different day.