Quote Originally Posted by maxitron View Post
Hello everyone.
Let me introduce myself.
My name is Max (Максим),I am 32 years old and I live in Kazakhstan.
I am married and we have two children, a son who is 12 and an 8 year old daugther 8 year old.
Name of My wife's name is Lyuba (Люба), her and she is 33 .
I am studying English, and I wish to come go to Canada with my family to Canada.
As MISSFOXYSWEETCHERRY wrote, you could clarify the reason for going to Canada to make the sentence better.