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    Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?

    Just curious. Somebody I know wrote this:

    "Poor queen ant
    how electric is your spasm
    wing oil spill
    ill clean after death

    you oh ant
    prickly face
    scream silence in
    bloodstained glass

    you vibrate oh ant
    I thought you were my phone
    I can’t save you with my tears
    Even tho I am not human
    your therapist
    Saving you

    Are you oh mercy ants
    Great being of my disposition?
    Driving force in
    Concrete tumor

    Streaming thru itself
    Into out of itself
    Communicating
    With itself to serve
    mother of creation

    Where I walk around
    oh ant cautiously
    I step around"
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    Re: Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?

    Sure why not?

    It is not bad. A bit "out there" but poetry

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    Re: Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?

    Quote Originally Posted by emeraldeyez
    Sure why not?
    It is not bad. A bit "out there" but poetry
    Thank you. I am glad if it's not bad. Doesn't make any sense to me.
    It's my son's. All of a sudden he decided to become a poet.
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    Re: Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?

    I'll admit the "you vibrate oh ant, i thought you were my phone" part made me laugh out loud. :P

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