Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?
Just curious. Somebody I know wrote this:
"Poor queen ant
how electric is your spasm
wing oil spill
ill clean after death
you oh ant
prickly face
scream silence in
bloodstained glass
you vibrate oh ant
I thought you were my phone
I can’t save you with my tears
Even tho I am not human
your therapist
Saving you
Are you oh mercy ants
Great being of my disposition?
Driving force in
Concrete tumor
Streaming thru itself
Into out of itself
Communicating
With itself to serve
mother of creation
Where I walk around
oh ant cautiously
I step around"
Re: Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?
Sure why not?
It is not bad. A bit "out there" but poetry :)
Re: Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?
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Originally Posted by emeraldeyez
Sure why not?
It is not bad. A bit "out there" but poetry :)
Thank you. I am glad if it's not bad. Doesn't make any sense to me.
It's my son's. All of a sudden he decided to become a poet.
Re: Would you call it a poetry, wild poetry?
I'll admit the "you vibrate oh ant, i thought you were my phone" part made me laugh out loud. :P