Hi!
If it's possible correct my mistakes in three steps (like this).
The step one is highlight only grammar mistakes. The step two is highlight
grammar and stylistic mistakes. The step three is would you please to rephrase my sentences in
English in order they would be like written by a native speaker, if it's possible.
Thanks!
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As you probably know Russia is a very big country. Besides it has a reach
history full of bright events. But let's talk about nowadays. I mean the
presidential elections. I think it's fine that the United States and
Russia have elections in the same year and we are able to compare ones.
When the candidates in the United States are visiting different states during
a presidential campaign we have a very different current state of affairs
here in Russia. I'll try to explain that. If we would talk about the
quantity of candidates in Russia then everything is fine. We have the four
candidate to a president. There are Medvedev, Zyganov, Zhrininovsky and
one more candidate. Quite frankly I even don't know his name as he has no
chance to become a president. In that case the other question arises. Who
will be the next president of Russia?
If you'd ask an average person on a street, you'd get a very straight
answer. So Dmitry Medvedev probably (the probability equals 100%) will be
the next president of Russia. Maybe you would ask yourself: What's going on? Can
we change something? Why events are going in this way? The answer is
really simple in my opinion. First let's remember how the current
president of Russia has been becoming a president. On the 31st of December
2000 Boris Yeltsin made a declaration. We have a sort of tradition like
this in Russia. And tsar Boris said something like: "People of Russia!
I am sorry. I am very tired and I'll go away. You have to pick another
president. Good bye!" Quite frankly I don't remember his speech by heart
as it contained a lot of smart words.
And from this moment something incredible started to happen. I didn't
believe it! Vladimir Putin has been appearing in each issue of news! I've
been turning a TV and started flip to the channels. He was everywhere. Look!
Vladimir Putin is inside a submarine. Vladimir Putin is on a ship.
Vladimir Putin has a meeting with poor people. Vladimir Putin is flying
to Chechnya as a copilot. Vladimir Putin and peasants. Vladimir Putin
and... Et cetera, et cetera.
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