Excellent idea, Pravit, writing short stories in Russian and giving them to us, speakers of Russian, to correct. Why don't we all do a similar thing in English...
Anyway, here's my short story (very short, but this is only the beginning):
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Stolen Childhood
My mum was a Borstal screw and my dad was a pikey. I never saw my dad - the villagers set fire to their campsite one night and they all died in their sleep inside their caravans. The pigs took a less than lukewarm interest in the case, with the gypos gone it was less pain in the arse for them. Everyone seemed to be happy except for my mum who very soon took to the bottle.
(to be continued...)
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2All native speakers of English, please correct my work. Thank you.