Thanks for your replies.
I just want to say that I am so grateful for your correction. This site is the only place I know where I can have my writings checked and corrected
I’m going to post one more passage of my story soon and I hope you will read it and make corrections. I would do it tonight if I wasn’t as tired from my day job as I am now

Quote Originally Posted by BlackMage
It's very very good and there are only a couple minor errors. I'd say it's better than what the average American high school student writes.
Im flattered