Thread: Please help me with translate of "Останусь" song

Останусь…
(«Город 312»)


В конце тоннеля яркий свет
Слепой звезды.
Подошвы на сухой листве оставят следы.
Еще под кожей бьется пульс
И надо жить
Я больше, может, не вернусь,
А может, я с тобой останусь

Припев:
Останусь пеплом на губах,
Останусь пламенем в глазах,
В твоих руках дыханьем ветра.
Останусь снегом на щеке,
Останусь светом вдалеке.
Я для тебя останусь светом.

В конце тоннеля яркий свет
И я иду, иду по выжженной траве,
По тонкому льду.
Не плачь, я боли не боюсь,
Ее там нет.
Я больше, может, не вернусь
А может, я с тобой останусь

Припев (дважды)

is it ?

I will stay…
(Russian original by «Город 312»)

The blind star glare is being
seen at the end of tunnel.
My soles will make the footprints in the dry leaf.
The pulse have been sensing under my skin yet
And I need to live.
I am at the crossroads.
I’ll not be able to return much more,
or I’ll be able to stay with you.
What may I choose?

Refrain:
I will stay like ash in your lips,
like a flame of your eyes,
As a breath of wind in your hands.
I will stay like snow on your cheek,
as a distant shine.
I will become as light for you

The blind star glare is being
seen at the end of tunnel.
And I’m going on scorched grass,
On thin ice.
Don’t cry. I am not scaring of any hurt
because there is have no it.
I am at the crossroads.
I’ll not be able to return much more,
or I’ll be able to stay with you.
What will I need to choose?

Refrain (twice)

Вот мой предварительный перевод песни. Иногда перевожу недословно в попыткe уловить искусство песни.

There is a bright light at the end of the tunnel
Like the light of a blind star.
My feet will leave tracks in the dry leaves.
There is still a pulse beating beneath my skin
And I need to live.
Maybe I won't come back anymore,
And maybe I'll stay with you.

Refrain
I will stay like ashes on your lips,
I will stay like a flame in your eyes,
Like a breath of wind in your hands.
I will stay like snow on your cheek,
I will stay like a light in the distance,
Like a light to guide you, I will stay.

There is a bright light at the end of the tunnel
Like the light of a blind star.
And I keep walking and walking on the scorched grass,
On thin ice.
Don’t cry. I am not afraid of pain,
There isn't any there.
Maybe I won't come back anymore,
And maybe I'll stay with you.

Останусь - Город 312 - Дневной Дозор
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHLNNccGTag

Спасибо за перевод. И спасибо за ссылку на видео. С наступающим Вас новым годом. Желаю Вам любви и счастья.