Thread: Is it correct?

Hi everybody. I want to make good "about" text for my ICQ, and I want to use my favorite Russian song for it, translated in English.

Here is it:

Our future is in mist
In our past-Hell and Paradise
Our money can’t feet in pocket
It’s new day become-Wake Up!

Is it correct?

Original was:
Наше будущее-туман
В нашем прошлом то ад то рай
Наши деньги не лезут в карман
Вот и утро-вставай!
(Кино-Муравейник)

Заранее спасибо.

P.S. Sorry for bad English ^_^;

Hey, a fellow Kino-head!

Our future is in mist
In our past-Hell and Paradise
Our money can’t feet in pocket
It’s new day become-Wake Up!

It's cool but I'd say something like:

Our future is cloudy
Our past - Hell and Heaven
Our money won't fit in our pockets (probably there's a better way to translate this one)
And a new day - arise!

Я не люблю когда мне врут...но от правды я тоже устал...

Arigato: