ok heres the thing, I translated one of my favorite worship songs into Russian...but I'm not sure if the translation is as accurate as it should be or if it makes sense so I was wondering if anyone here could help me. Here are the original lyrics to the song:

In this place
You are here
By your mercy I draw near
In my heart
Take Your place
You are here

The same power that conquered the grave lives in me

Your love that rescued the earth lives in me

Ok and here is what I came up with for the Russian version :


В этом месте
At This point

Вы здесь
You are here

Я рядом с вами сейчас
I’m with You now

Жить во мне
Live in me

В моем сердца
In My heart

Вы здесь
You are Here

Мощность, что победил смерть живет во мне
Power that has conquered death lives in me

Любовь, которая спасла земле живет во мне
Love who saved the earth lives in me


Any help would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!