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    Correct my descriptions (for English guys), please

    Hi there.
    Check this message for mistakes, please:

    I have been worked in software development with web applications, enterprise servers over 4+ years.

    I have a lot of experience in Javascript (backbone and ember frameworks)

    My competency lies in designing and writing complex front-end of enterprise/web/network applications, where reliability is primary goal. I have written applications using Python (Django), PHP (Symfony) in the past. I write well-documented, maintainable code and try to use Revision control systems (git, svn, cvs) wherever possible.
    Thanks a lot, guys.
    correct me, please. I'm russian native speaker (can I say "I'm russian native"?). Skype: name-xru. ICQ: 227394254. Always glad to speak.

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    I have worked over four years in software development with web applications and enterprise servers.

    I have substantial experience in Javascript (backbone and ember frameworks)

    I am especially good at designing and writing complex front-end of enterprise/web/network applications, where reliability is the primary goal. I have written applications using Python (Django), PHP (Symfony) in the past. I write well-documented, maintainable code and try to use Revision control systems (git, svn, cvs) wherever possible.

    почему Revision с прописной буквой, это названия софта? if it's not a name, use "revision"

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    I believe applications get developed. To "write an application" is very Russian

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    Revision/Version control systems is a group of software solutions that help developers to store, share and maintain source code
    CVS - Concurrent Versions System
    SVN - SubVersioN (more sophisticated than CVS)
    GIT - refers to a particular piece of software of source code management

    n8m - if you writing that you use git in your resume I suggest to specify what kind of CVS and SVN clients you use, otherwise it would look like you don't understand the subject

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    It's probably not much of an improvement but I am adding to the suggestions:
    I have worked for over four years in software development with web applications and enterprise servers. I have substantial experience in Javascript (background and ember frameworks).

    I specialize at writing complex enterprise applications across a variety of networks where reliability and security are crucial. I have also written software in Python (Django) and PHP (Symfony). I ensure that code is well-documented, maintainable and try to use Revison Control Systems (Git, SVN, CVS) whenever possible.

    I also suggest to be more specific in what you have used and include any reference.

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    I am questioning the use of capital letters in "revision control systems" -- if this is just a generic term rather than a patented software program, then no caps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 14Russian View Post
    I have substantial experience in Javascript (background and ember frameworks).
    That would be incorrect
    Backbone and Ember are the names of Javascript frameworks. (I guess should be started with capital letters)
    Quote Originally Posted by 14Russian View Post
    I specialize at writing complex enterprise applications across
    front-end is the key word here, cannot be omitted

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    А теперь давайте устроим здесь холивар SVN vs Git, а то явно чего-то не хватает.

    SVN - вчерашний день, настоящие профи пользуются только Git, а SVN форсят копирасты, которые хотят, чтобы исходники были доступны через одно место (а не через все).
    "Россия для русских" - это неправильно. Остальные-то чем лучше?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doomer View Post
    That would be incorrect
    Backbone and Ember are the names of Javascript frameworks. (I guess should be started with capital letters)

    front-end is the key word here, cannot be omitted
    Yes, Background and Ember should be capitalized. He should already know that, though.

    As for including 'front-end:' It gets wordy and I believe it doesn't add to the description. He can specify further.

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