Correct my descriptions (for English guys), please

Hi there.
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I have been worked in software development with web applications, enterprise servers over 4+ years.

I have a lot of experience in Javascript (backbone and ember frameworks)

My competency lies in designing and writing complex front-end of enterprise/web/network applications, where reliability is primary goal. I have written applications using Python (Django), PHP (Symfony) in the past. I write well-documented, maintainable code and try to use Revision control systems (git, svn, cvs) wherever possible.

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Thanks a lot, guys.

I have worked over four years in software development with web applications and enterprise servers.

I have substantial experience in Javascript (backbone and ember frameworks)

I am especially good at designing and writing complex front-end of enterprise/web/network applications, where reliability is the primary goal. I have written applications using Python (Django), PHP (Symfony) in the past. I write well-documented, maintainable code and try to use Revision control systems (git, svn, cvs) wherever possible.

почему Revision с прописной буквой, это названия софта? if it's not a name, use "revision"

I believe applications get developed. To "write an application" is very Russian :)

Chaika
Revision/Version control systems is a group of software solutions that help developers to store, share and maintain source code
CVS - Concurrent Versions System
SVN - SubVersioN (more sophisticated than CVS)
GIT - refers to a particular piece of software of source code management

n8m - if you writing that you use git in your resume I suggest to specify what kind of CVS and SVN clients you use, otherwise it would look like you don't understand the subject

It's probably not much of an improvement but I am adding to the suggestions:
I have worked for over four years in software development with web applications and enterprise servers. I have substantial experience in Javascript (background and ember frameworks).

I specialize at writing complex enterprise applications across a variety of networks where reliability and security are crucial. I have also written software in Python (Django) and PHP (Symfony). I ensure that code is well-documented, maintainable and try to use Revison Control Systems (Git, SVN, CVS) whenever possible.

I also suggest to be more specific in what you have used and include any reference.

I am questioning the use of capital letters in "revision control systems" -- if this is just a generic term rather than a patented software program, then no caps.

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Originally Posted by 14Russian

I have substantial experience in Javascript (background and ember frameworks).

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That would be incorrect
Backbone and Ember are the names of Javascript frameworks. (I guess should be started with capital letters)

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Originally Posted by 14Russian

I specialize at writing complex enterprise applications across

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front-end is the key word here, cannot be omitted

А теперь давайте устроим здесь холивар SVN vs Git, а то явно чего-то не хватает.

SVN - вчерашний день, настоящие профи пользуются только Git, а SVN форсят копирасты, которые хотят, чтобы исходники были доступны через одно место (а не через все).

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Originally Posted by Doomer

That would be incorrect
Backbone and Ember are the names of Javascript frameworks. (I guess should be started with capital letters)

front-end is the key word here, cannot be omitted

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Yes, Background and Ember should be capitalized. He should already know that, though.

As for including 'front-end:' It gets wordy and I believe it doesn't add to the description. He can specify further.