It's a difficult question, because grammatically correct isn't always normal or common usage. But yes, in English it is normal to say/write as MissFoxy has done.
"The tall young woman..."
This "lovely and bright bouquet" would also be shortened => lovely bright bouquet.
And possibly "with a wave of her hand".
It's a difficult thing, about choice of words. I'd probably use radiate instead of bloom, since bloom is more about the actual flower structure itself. But grammatically, I think it's ok. And I'd use scents/scenting instead of smells.
"The tall young woman in the red dress walks along the ocean coast, smiles happily and greets her beloved with a wave of her hand. The lovely bright bouquet of fresh flowers in his hand radiates the sweet fragrances of spring, scenting gently and coloring in her soul with love."



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