Hi iCake,

Without looking at the transcripts I heard:

1st

?
river
stow
moo

Time of seven ??? are very long
Did they leave the river for a drive. (Good!)

2nd

nice
lease
hat
singer

??????? hat (I only heard he word "hat" in this sentence).

When she touched her finger to the elephant I had to laugh. (Very good!)

3rd

?
wipers
gears
nose
excuse

These ? turn the dials.
Those gears run the wipers when ?. (Until the last word good sentence).

4th

face
this
clothes
police
stops

It's a nice face. (Good!)
This office is close (the first time I heard 'closed') to the police station.

Now after reading the transcript:

1st

"Stove" and "move" need a stronger "v".

2nd

"Leaf" and "half" need a stronger "f".

3rd

"These" first time needs a stronger "th".

At the end of the sentence "it" needs to be stronger "when it rains".

4th

"close" needs more practice.

Overall it was good but with an accent. My wife will listen sometime soon.


Scott











Quote Originally Posted by iCake View Post
Hello again. I've been working on some sounds lately so I'd like it if you provided feedback on how I did. I won't hold it back I tried to immitate certain consonants mostly but the whole thing is made of sounds that I've already gone through. So I'd mostly like to hear a general opinion about the recordings. And, of course, the full transcription would be given to save your time. Here we go:

the first recording
the first recording's transcription


the second recording
the second recording's transcription


the third recording
the third recording's transcription


the fourth recording
the fourth recording's transcription