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28th day of the same month
Sauron invited himself to demonstration once again. This time, he claimed that he took into consideration the lessons of previous experiments and the new model...

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22nd day of the 3rd month
Sauron wanted to vindicate himself in Boss’ eyes very much so he prepared a surprise. The surprise was called the mini-orc.
The matter of the fact, as Sau...

They were going to eat him in a pinch.

is "guys" better?

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32nd day
We found something. It doesn’t seem to be Gondolin but that was more than enough. Only three of us saved, only accidentally. Tilguk, the fine fellow, hacked his way to waterfall...

Is this better?

The troops rained down from the cliff;

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22nd day of the next month
We’ve been at swamps for five weeks. We’re looking for Gondolin. We still didn’t manage to find it – and why should it be here? Elves don’t like swamps – they...

He took sentry service in the 5th lab - his birthplace.

A sectional view: innards etc.

Hi, everybody! I decided to check my translator's skills on the well nown in Runet Silmarillion spoof "Дневник одного орка"("Diary of an orc") by Farit Akhmejanov. Please point me to my mistakes.
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