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    Please help me with translation

    It is a song by Philip Kirkorov. The words of this song are very tender (loving???). Please help me to translate them. I made my own translation, but I don't know English enough.

    Просто подари

    Ласковое солнце моё в паутине облачных дней...
    Только как увидел ее - стало и светлей, и теплей!...
    Заиграла в сердце капель,
    И в Душе проснулся апрель!...
    И Любовь, что долго спала,
    Обрела два белых крыла!...

    Припев:
    Просто подари мне один только взгляд,
    И волшебный свой поцелуй подари!
    И я сразу сказочно стану богат,
    Богаче, чем все принцы и все короли!

    Запахи цветов и весны даже среди лютой зимы...
    И такие снятся мне сны! Мы одни, одни только мы...
    Не отдам тебя никому! Вызову весь мир на войну!...
    И когда с победой вернусь,
    В волосы твои окунусь!...

    Припев (2 раза)


    in English

    Just grant me it

    The light of my life was in spider's web of cloudy days…
    When I had seen her, my life became more lightly and warmly!
    My heart is thawing out, the dripping is playing there,
    And April woke up in my soul!
    And my love which was sleeping so long,
    Has found two white wings!

    Refrain (2 times)
    Just grant me only one sight,
    And grant me your miraculous kiss!
    Right away I will be fabulously rich,
    I will be more rich then all princes and all kings.

    I catch the smells of flowers and Spring inside relentless frost..
    The miracle like that has been dreamed me! We are alone, only we are…
    I will never give you to anybody! I will challenge to a war all world!
    When I come back as a winner,
    I will plunge into your hair!

    Refrain (2 times)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8vWhPDmFEx0
    Иногда потрясающие вещи находятся в неожиданных местах.
    Sometimes tremendous things are found in unexpected places
    Please, correct my mistakes

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    Re: Please help me with translation

    Hello ekaterinak. I mainly looked at your English. There may be better suggestions, but here are my corrections, alternatives and relocated words:
    Quote Originally Posted by ekaterinak
    Just grant me it/this

    The light of my life was in a spider's web of cloudy days…
    When I [s:2qw3azzf]had seen[/s:2qw3azzf] saw her, my life became [s:2qw3azzf]more[/s:2qw3azzf] lighter/brighter and warmer!
    My heart is thawing out, I played in the dripping/drops [s:2qw3azzf]is playing[/s:2qw3azzf] there,
    And in the April Shower my soul woke up/awoke!
    And my Love which was sleeping/which had slept for so long,
    Has found two white wings!

    Refrain (2 times)
    Just grant me only one sight,
    And grant me your miraculous kiss!
    Right away I will be fabulously rich,
    I will be [s:2qw3azzf]more[/s:2qw3azzf] richer than all the princes and all the kings.

    I catch the smells of flowers and Spring even inside the relentless frost/winter..
    A miracle like that has been dreamed by me! We are alone, only we are there…/it's only us...
    I will never give you up to anybody! I will challenge all the world to [s:2qw3azzf]a[/s:2qw3azzf] war!
    When I come back as the winner,
    I will plunge myself into your hair!

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    Re: Please help me with translation

    Quote Originally Posted by Ken Watts
    Hello ekaterinak. I mainly looked at your English. There may be better suggestions, but here are my corrections, alternatives and relocated words:
    Quote Originally Posted by ekaterinak
    Just grant me it/this

    The light of my life was in a spider's web of cloudy days…
    When I [s:1ej0ilds]had seen[/s:1ej0ilds] saw her, my life became [s:1ej0ilds]more[/s:1ej0ilds] lighter/brighter and warmer!
    My heart is thawing out, I played in the dripping/drops [s:1ej0ilds]is playing[/s:1ej0ilds] there,
    And in the April Shower my soul woke up/awoke!
    And my Love which was sleeping/which had slept for so long,
    Has found two white wings!

    Refrain (2 times)
    Just grant me only one sight,
    And grant me your miraculous kiss!
    Right away I will be fabulously rich,
    I will be [s:1ej0ilds]more[/s:1ej0ilds] richer than all the princes and all the kings.

    I catch the smells of flowers and Spring even inside the relentless frost/winter..
    A miracle like that has been dreamed by me! We are alone, only we are there…/it's only us...
    I will never give you up to anybody! I will challenge all the world to [s:1ej0ilds]a[/s:1ej0ilds] war!
    When I come back as the winner,
    I will plunge myself into your hair!
    Спасибо большое!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thank you very so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Иногда потрясающие вещи находятся в неожиданных местах.
    Sometimes tremendous things are found in unexpected places
    Please, correct my mistakes

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    Re: Please help me with translation

    My version; I didn't follow punctuation.

    Let me have

    My affectionate sun in a web of cloudy days
    became brighter and warmer the moment it saw her
    the drip of my thawing heart started to sparkle
    and in my soul April awoke
    and love, asleep for so long
    found two white wings

    Let me have just one glance
    let me have your magical kiss
    and I'll become fabulously rich
    richer than all the princes and kings

    The scent of flowers and spring even in the midst of fierce winter
    and what dreams I have, just us, us alone
    I won't give you to anyone, I'll challenge the whole world to war
    and when I return from victory
    into your hair I'll plunge
    Кому - нары, кому - Канары.

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    Re: Please help me with translation

    Quote Originally Posted by sperk
    My version; I didn't follow punctuation.

    Let me have

    My affectionate sun in a web of cloudy days
    became brighter and warmer the moment it saw her
    the drip of my thawing heart started to sparkle
    and in my soul April awoke
    and love, asleep for so long
    found two white wings

    Let me have just one glance
    let me have your magical kiss
    and I'll become fabulously rich
    richer than all the princes and kings

    The scent of flowers and spring even in the midst of fierce winter
    and what dreams I have, just us, us alone
    I won't give you to anyone, I'll challenge the whole world to war
    and when I return from victory
    into your hair I'll plunge
    Thank you very much. Nice to see 2 versions of one meaning. Thank you for your help.
    Иногда потрясающие вещи находятся в неожиданных местах.
    Sometimes tremendous things are found in unexpected places
    Please, correct my mistakes

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