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    How might life change if there were no automobiles in the wo

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    How might life change if there were no automobiles in the world?

    The life would change significantly if there were no automobiles in the world. There would not be any transport for people, as a result they have to move by themselves. First, that means people would spend a lot of time in the travel and spend a lot of money to support themselves during the travel. People would have to use for this purposes horses or donkeys. But the chance to move by train still remains. The second change, people would be more vulnerable to casualties , because of absent of possibility to move mobile if something happens. For example, a first aid from the ambulance to the person who had got injured would come in a long time. Another example is when a person get victim of crime, police would not come in a time since there are no cars. But along with disadvantages, there are some advantages with automobile absence. Nowadays, many people die in automobile disasters and air crushes. Every hour 300 000 human lives would be saved, because namely such number people die on roads in the world. Humans would be able to find disadvantages and positives sides of the world without automobiles.

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    How might life change if there were no automobiles in the world?

    The life would change significantly if there were no automobiles in the world. There would not be any transportation for people, and as a result they would have to get around by themselves. First, that would mean that people would spend a lot of time and money traveling (или on the road). People would have to use for this purpose horses or donkeys. But the trains will still be available. Secondly, people would be more vulnerable to casualties , due to inability to transport quickly in casesomething happens. For example, getting first aid from the ambulance to the person who got injured would take a long time. Another example is if a person becomes a victim of a crime police would not arrive in time since there would be no cars. But along with disadvantages, there are some advantages to automobile absence. Nowadays, many people die in automobile disasters and air crAshes. Every hour 300 000 human lives in the world would be saved, because namely such numberof people dieS every hour in traffic accidents. Humans would be able to find disadvantages and positives sides to the world without automobiles.
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    Re: How might life change if there were no automobiles in the wo

    I added on to koynas' changes....



    How might life change if there were no automobiles in the world?

    [s:1m5lulrb]The[/s:1m5lulrb] Life would change significantly if there were no automobiles in the world. There would not be any transportation for people, and as a result they would have to get around by themselves. First, that would mean [s:1m5lulrb]that[/s:1m5lulrb] people would spend a lot of time and money traveling (или on the road). People would have to use for this purpose (alternate means of transportation to help with carrying packages and heavy items such as) horses or donkeys. But the trains will still be available for daily commuting and very long distance travel. Secondly, people would be more vulnerable to casualties , due to the inability to transport them quickly in cases of emergency [s:1m5lulrb]something happens[/s:1m5lulrb]. For example, getting first aid from the ambulance to the person who got injured would take a long time. Another example is if a person becomes a victim of a crime police would not arrive [s:1m5lulrb]in[/s:1m5lulrb] [s:1m5lulrb]time[/s:1m5lulrb] quickly since there would be no cars to transport them. But along with disadvantages, there are some advantages to the absence of automobiles. Nowadays, many people die in automobile disasters and air crAshes(what do air crashes have to do with this article?). Every hour 300,000 human lives in the world would be saved, [s:1m5lulrb]because namely such[/s:1m5lulrb] as this is the number of people who die[s:1m5lulrb]S[/s:1m5lulrb] every hour in traffic accidents. Humans [s:1m5lulrb]would[/s:1m5lulrb] will always be able to find disadvantages and advantages [s:1m5lulrb]positives sides[/s:1m5lulrb] to [s:1m5lulrb]the[/s:1m5lulrb] a world without automobiles.
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    Re: How might life change if there were no automobiles in the wo

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