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Your ideal holiday resort

Ideal holiday resort for me is my village Sogratl. Although a road to a village is long and exhausting, usually I am anticipating arrival. Sogratl is very irreplacable place for rest, because of free air, spring water, amicable people. Once more thing going for this type of holiday resort is physical training. Every person who live in village is charged by hard work. It's particularly important for townpeople, like me, that has lack of physical work and are loaded by mental work.
It's place that unites people sparsed through all Russia, but have common roots. That's why Sogratl is ideal holiday resort.