Thread: Are there mistakes? Thanks

Originally Posted by Liquinn

Почему я люблю изучать языки?
Во-первых, я хотела бы в этой статье поделиться с вами моим мнением. ... Я хотел бы делать массаж!

There is switch from female gender (хотела) to male (хотел) here.
Also "получать гроши" is some kind of vulgar or archaic phrase, it is out of style of another parts.

You rejected 2 of my last corrections, so I will not repeat them.

Other things are very good.