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    Corrections please anybody and thanks

    Ветеран Маонти из Яуллониф есть обвиняло с издавает
    угрозая и подделыает документ. Сержант лари Обриен
    есть обвиняло с кража вниз пять тысяча доллари, нарушение
    из доверие, и издавает подделывало документи в связи
    с деныи это были недостающий последний год, полиция
    сказали.

    A veteran Mountie in Yellowknife has been charged with uttering
    threats and forging documents. Sergeant Larry O'Brien has been
    charged with theft under $5,000, breach of trust, and uttering forged
    documents in connection with money that went missing last year, police
    said.

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    Re: Corrections please anybody and thanks

    A veteran Mountie in Yellowknife has been charged with uttering
    threats and forging documents. Sergeant Larry O'Brien has been
    charged with theft under $5,000, breach of trust, and uttering forged
    documents in connection with money that went missing last year, police
    said.
    My translation:

    Полиция сообщила, что ветерану Монти в Йеллоунайфе было предъявлено обвинение в высказывании угроз и в подделке документов. Сержанту Ларри О'Брайeну предъявлено обвинение в краже на сумму менее $5000, злоупотреблении доверием и использовании поддельных документов в связи с пропажей денег в прошлом году.
    Please, correct my mistakes, except for the cases I misspell something on purpose!

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    Re: Corrections please anybody and thanks

    Thanks Basil ! I diligently went through every translated word that you came up with and boy were they all perfect!! Thanks again!!

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    Re: Corrections please anybody and thanks

    You are welcome! Btw Heartfelty, maybe you should stick with a little simplier sentences while working on your grammar? Just a thought.
    Please, correct my mistakes, except for the cases I misspell something on purpose!

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    Re: Corrections please anybody and thanks

    heartfelty, I agree with Basil77, and I would add that I think your approach to learning Russian will not bear fruit, especially as you will be generating many incorrect utterances, which is not what you want to be doing. I recommend you buy a textbook and follow it through all the exercises, in the sequence presented.

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    Re: Corrections please anybody and thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Basil77
    Полиция сообщила, что ветерану Монти в Йеллоунайфе...
    Mountie - это не фамилия, (А Карл Маркс и Фридрих Энгельс - не муж и жена...) а организация, 21-year veteran of the RCMP, Royal Canadian Mounted Police то бишь.
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