Thread: Corrections please anybody and thanks

Ветеран Маонти из Яуллониф есть обвиняло с издавает
угрозая и подделыает документ. Сержант лари Обриен
есть обвиняло с кража вниз пять тысяча доллари, нарушение
из доверие, и издавает подделывало документи в связи
с деныи это были недостающий последний год, полиция
сказали.

A veteran Mountie in Yellowknife has been charged with uttering
threats and forging documents. Sergeant Larry O'Brien has been
charged with theft under $5,000, breach of trust, and uttering forged
documents in connection with money that went missing last year, police
said.

A veteran Mountie in Yellowknife has been charged with uttering
threats and forging documents. Sergeant Larry O'Brien has been
charged with theft under $5,000, breach of trust, and uttering forged
documents in connection with money that went missing last year, police
said.

My translation:

Полиция сообщила, что ветерану Монти в Йеллоунайфе было предъявлено обвинение в высказывании угроз и в подделке документов. Сержанту Ларри О'Брайeну предъявлено обвинение в краже на сумму менее $5000, злоупотреблении доверием и использовании поддельных документов в связи с пропажей денег в прошлом году.

Thanks Basil ! I diligently went through every translated word that you came up with and boy were they all perfect!! Thanks again!!

You are welcome! Btw Heartfelty, maybe you should stick with a little simplier sentences while working on your grammar? Just a thought.

heartfelty, I agree with Basil77, and I would add that I think your approach to learning Russian will not bear fruit, especially as you will be generating many incorrect utterances, which is not what you want to be doing. I recommend you buy a textbook and follow it through all the exercises, in the sequence presented.

Originally Posted by Basil77

Полиция сообщила, что ветерану Монти в Йеллоунайфе...

Mountie - это не фамилия, (А Карл Маркс и Фридрих Энгельс - не муж и жена...) а организация, 21-year veteran of the RCMP, Royal Canadian Mounted Police то бишь.