Thread: very short translation

Hi guys,

I have to make I present, for a I girl which I like very much... I explane you the situation: next week will be her birthday, and I want to buy her this for present: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFDiiIoobI0

Now, since I am going to live in Moscow for a few months... I want to write her on the first page of this travel book a dedication, inviting her to come in Moscow visiting me... I am asking you to help me out for a correct translation in Russian (she too studies Russian):

This is the text to translate:

"To my sweet Elena on her 24th birthday,

You are always in my thoughts.

M.

p.s. leave a few pages for Moscow : ) "


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Thank you in advance!

Pleaseee somebody help me

Originally Posted by klopp

"To my sweet Elena on her 24th birthday,

You are always in my thoughts.

M.

p.s. leave a few pages for Moscow : ) "

"Моей дорогой Елене на её двадцатичетырёхлетие,

Ты навсегда в моих мыслях. (or: Ты навсегда в моём сердце.)

М.

P.S. Оставь несколько страничек для Москвы! : )"


"You are always in my thoughts" sounds not very natural in translation. I suggest "Ты навсегда в моём сердце" = "You are always in my heart", if it is not too romantic for your case.

and "I always think about you" ?

maybe "you are always in my heart" is too much rmantic