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  1. September 16th, 2006, 09:05 PM #1
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    A TRYING TRANSLATION

    the sun has set and yesterday is done but today when it rises I will look at with you sharing the happiest of birthday smiles
    its my opinion - but its flexible
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  2. September 16th, 2006, 09:12 PM #2
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    sorry there is an it after look at
    its my opinion - but its flexible
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  3. September 16th, 2006, 09:36 PM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by mooman
    the sun has set and yesterday is done but today when it rises I will look at with you sharing the happiest of birthday smiles
    I don't know, maybe this way:

    Солнце село и вчерашний день закончился. Но сегодня, когда оно взойдёт, мы будем смотреть на него вместе, обмениваясь друг с другом счастливыми улыбками.

    What do you mean saying "birthday smiles"?
    Could you please occasionally correct my stupid errors!
    Korrigiert bitte ab und zu meine dummen Fehler!
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  4. September 16th, 2006, 09:38 PM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by Guin
    Но сегодня, когда оно поднимется, мы взглянем НА него вместе с тобой, обмениваясь друг с другом счастливыми улыбками.
    In Russian, all nationalities and their corresponding languages start with a lower-case letter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Оля
    Quote Originally Posted by Guin
    Но сегодня, когда оно поднимется, мы взглянем НА него вместе с тобой, обмениваясь друг с другом счастливыми улыбками.
    Какая ты быстрая, дала бы хоть минуточку, чтобы исправить самому.
    Could you please occasionally correct my stupid errors!
    Korrigiert bitte ab und zu meine dummen Fehler!
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  6. September 16th, 2006, 10:49 PM #6
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    Quote Originally Posted by Guin
    What do you mean saying "birthday smiles"?
    A birthday smile is that smile you wear when it is your birthday. In other words, a very happy smile. Then comes the happiest of birthday smiles, now that's gotta be some smile!
    Hei, rett norsken min og du er død.
    I am a notourriouse misspeller. Be easy on me.
    Пожалуйста! Исправляйте мои глупые ошибки (но оставьте умные)!
    Yo hablo español mejor que tú.
    Trusnse kal'rt eturule sikay!!! ))
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  7. September 16th, 2006, 11:05 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie
    Quote Originally Posted by Guin
    What do you mean saying "birthday smiles"?
    A birthday smile is that smile you wear when it is your birthday. In other words, a very happy smile. Then comes the happiest of birthday smiles, now that's gotta be some smile!
    Thank you for the explanation, but I'm not sure if there's something like this in Russian. Nevertheless, here is one more variant:

    Солнце зашло и вчерашний день закончился. Но сегодня, когда оно взойдёт, мы будем смотреть на него вместе, обмениваясь друг с другом счастливыми и безмятежными улыбками.

    but this way is better:

    Солнце зашло и вчерашний день закончился. Но сегодня, когда оно взойдёт, мы будем смотреть на него вместе, счастливо и безмятежно улыбаясь друг другу.
    Could you please occasionally correct my stupid errors!
    Korrigiert bitte ab und zu meine dummen Fehler!
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  8. September 17th, 2006, 12:35 AM #8
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    Quote Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie
    A birthday smile is that smile you wear when it is your birthday
    Oh brother. It’s so pathetic. I gonna kill myselфф.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DagothWarez
    Quote Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie
    A birthday smile is that smile you wear when it is your birthday
    Oh brother. It’s so pathetic. I gonna kill myselфф.
    Now, now, young trooper. Put on a big birthday smile and go play with the other kids!
    Hei, rett norsken min og du er død.
    I am a notourriouse misspeller. Be easy on me.
    Пожалуйста! Исправляйте мои глупые ошибки (но оставьте умные)!
    Yo hablo español mejor que tú.
    Trusnse kal'rt eturule sikay!!! ))
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  10. September 17th, 2006, 01:07 AM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by kalinka_vinnie
    Put on a big birthday smile and go play with the other kids!
    Dagoth likes you. You are pal.
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