Thread: NEED HELP WITH TRANSLATING MY POEMS INTO ENGLISH

Will be glad if someone who is studying Russian
will try to translate some parts of my poems into English (or Dutch)
I really need it

Feel free to contact

I m female from Moscow

ikke25@zmail.ru

You will probably get more responses if you actually post your poems here.

Pravit is right but you can get even more responses if you'd put your bikini photos here.

Female, 27 y.o. blonde, 175/50, 90-60-90 finds someone to translate a poem... feel free to contact...

blonde? to translate a poem? :)

Originally Posted by JJ

Female, 27 y.o.

Looks 25.

Originally Posted by JJ

Female, 27 y.o. blonde, 175/50, 90-60-90

ищет приключения на вторые 90.

Originally Posted by N

Looks 25.

She was 25 when she registered her email box. Just look at her nick.

кергуду
27, но выгляжу на 25 (looks 25)

Originally Posted by alexei

blonde? to translate a poem?

Well, she asks to translate her *poem*, not an article about quantum physics.

27 but looks 25? And how is she placed for teeth?

Originally Posted by VendingMachine

27 but looks 25? And how is she placed for teeth?

Didnt know that this place is just full with scumsucking maggots
At least I know now that such people is looking for a stupid chat
only ...LOL

Originally Posted by Moscowgirl27

Originally Posted by VendingMachine

27 but looks 25? And how is she placed for teeth?

Didnt know that this place is just full with scumsucking maggots
At least I know now that such people is looking for a stupid chat
only ...LOL

VM is sort of obsessed with teeth. And the fleeting nature of his virility. Don't mind him.

Thanks Lindsey, you are a friendly person,
Actually I though everyone is serious and obsessed with languaged and
culture (not teeth! ) eeeehhh It seems to me noone will help
with my piece of art




:P

Originally Posted by Линдзи

Originally Posted by Moscowgirl27

Originally Posted by VendingMachine

27 but looks 25? And how is she placed for teeth?

Didnt know that this place is just full with scumsucking maggots
At least I know now that such people is looking for a stupid chat
only ...LOL

VM is sort of obsessed with teeth. And the fleeting nature of his virility. Don't mind him.

Originally Posted by Moscowgirl27

with my piece of art

Your poem probably sounds better in Russian anyways.

If your poem is to be translated into English, it will not be the same.

Post your poems anyway!

Originally Posted by BlackMage

Post your poems anyway!

If you want to know what my poems looks like approximatly...
There is a link, please

http://www.stihi.ru/poems/2002/11/25-658.html

If you will click om "Russian fleming" you will see some other poems.

Will be gratefull even to see a few parts of my poems which have no
rythm are translated....

Thanks ))

Originally Posted by Moscowgirl27

Originally Posted by VendingMachine

27 but looks 25? And how is she placed for teeth?

Didnt know that this place is just full with scumsucking maggots
At least I know now that such people is looking for a stupid chat
only ...LOL

OK, I stands corrected. I'll put it down as "more teeth than braincells" then, shall I? Never mind that, eh.
Anyway, could you please explain that poem to me? Frankly, I understood ...k all. You see, I was brought up on Byron, Burns and bitter. Modern poetry goes over my head. First of all, what I'd like to know is how to read it - there must be some sort of rythm kind of interwoven somehow between the lines or something. Now, I know that asking for the lines to actually rhyme is a pretty tall order these days, rhyming is what losers like Pushking and Byron did and nowadays only Cockneys duke of york in rhymes. Still, marking out phrasal stress would be a great help to unsophisticated readers like muggins here. The imagery in your poems must be very potent indeed, unfortunately, I couldn't figure out what all those characters were doing together. Riding the waves of commie bashing seems to be very popular these days - a must theme to explore for any budding artist/poet/whatever - and in my view your work looks a bit like a prepackaged food product for a western consumer, but do you think it is set to produce much resonance at home?

Moscowgirl27,
Your "maggots" outburst was understandable, but (perhaps apart from VM) it was harmless, if puerile, jesting.

I very much like the English rendering of your poem from a language point of view; I think the subject matter is a little above my head