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    hope you can correct me because i think that i have some mistakes here

    Hello !
    I want to say " as long as i am alive , i won't alllow you to feel sad even for one second" in Russian
    so here is my attempt to translate " до тех пор я живой, я не буду разрешать что ты грустно чувствуешь не даже для одной секунд "
    Thanks , Guys

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    Пока я жив (it's a set phrase), я ни на секунду не допущу того, чтобы ты грустила.

    That's my version, other versions are possible
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    I do not claim that my opinion is absolutely true.
    If you've spotted any mistake in my English, please, correct it. I want to be aware of any mistakes to efficiently eliminate them before they become a habit.

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    as long as i am alive , i won't alllow you to feel sad even for one second
    Almost literally: Пока я жив, я не позволю тебе загрустить даже на одну секунду.

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    Пока я жив, не дам тебе грустить ни секунды.

    Russian normally can use much less words for the same idea than English and it is a better style in Russian to avoid junk words. The words are longer in average though.
    "Россия для русских" - это неправильно. Остальные-то чем лучше?

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