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    Quote Originally Posted by it-ogo View Post
    Then it should be something like:
    "Конечно, везде, где будут использоваться ваши работы, я вставлю ссылки на вас."
    "конечно Я бы атрибут любого и все ваши работы."
    Thank you! But isn't that in the second person (you) rather than the first person (I)?

    Quote Originally Posted by chaika View Post
    The Russian text contains many errors.
    Any specific errors you want to bring up? Really, I can't improve unless I know where I'm messing up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IvarTheBoneless View Post
    Thank you! But isn't that in the second person (you) rather than the first person (I)?
    Here is word-by-word translation of what I proposed:

    Of_course, everywhere, where will be_used your works, I will_insert references to you.

    Quote Originally Posted by IvarTheBoneless View Post
    Any specific errors you want to bring up? Really, I can't improve unless I know where I'm messing up.
    They are too many. It is more easy to write a new text in Russian than to correct. You will hardly get anything much better with automatic translation. Still it is understandable (if you replace that one phrase).
    "Россия для русских" - это неправильно. Остальные-то чем лучше?

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