Thread: Correct english text, plz.

Hi! Plz correct all my mistakes and phrases. It's text for site. It very important to all Russian electronic commerce Apropos maybe someone need for this service? For you will be discount and even gratis if it'll minor work.

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Order and Payment
Services, samples and prices. Photo restoration and design.
I restore all kinds of photos damages. Make any photo-design.P.S. Here are really low prices.

Order.
Send me your photo - blabla@server.ru I'll estimate it and reply you. The size of the sending image must not exceed 1 Mb which is obtained by scanning your photo with resolution no greater than 600 dpi and saving it in JPG format.
Payment.
I accept bank transfer; western union; e-gold. Your restoration photo will be sent to you as soon as I receive payment. Before payment if you want I can send you preview of job (photo in low resolution or piece of photo).

Prices are estimates because usually photographies need for the individual estimation.
Send me photo and I'll estimate it.
Correction - $3 per one of this job:
Resizing, red eye reduction, removal of small scratches from non-critical areas, adjust colors and contrast of the photograph to optimize the quality, and any other small correction..
(Minimum order - $15, it's may be several photos.)Restoration - $25 to $40 per photo.
Repair of larger scratches, marks, cracks, creases, and stains, adding text, simple object or persona removal, etc.
(includes correction)
Moderate restoration - $40 to $80 per photo.
Repairing seriously faded/damaged photographs. Repair of facial features, water spots or damage, extensive cracking or tearing or complicated placement of people, objects or background.
(Includes restoration)
Collages - individual estimation.
Objects / persons addition / removal, background modifications, edge / border effects, etc.. Possible photos with stars.Colorizing (adding to color) - $5 per one color (see down for sample). If there are more than 10 colors then $3 per every next color.

Well, here's my attempt at correction.


Order and Payment
Services, samples and prices. Photo restoration and design.
I restore all kinds of damage to photographs and will create any photo design, all for a very low price!

Order.
Send me your photo - blabla@server.ru I'll estimate the fee and reply to you. The size of the sent image must not exceed 1 Mb, which can be accomplished by scanning your photo with a resolution of no greater than 600 dpi and saving it in JPG format.

Payment.
I accept bank transfers, western union and e-gold. Your restored photo will be sent to you as soon as I receive payment. If you like, I can send you a preview of the job (a photo in low resolution or a piece of the photo) before payment.

Prices are estimates, as usually photographs are needed to determine individual fees.
Send me a photo and I'll estimate the cost of the job.
Correction - $3 for each of these:
Resizing, red-eye reduction, removal of small scratches from non-critical areas, adjustment of color and contrast in the photograph to optimize quality, or any other small correction.
(Minimum order - $15. The order may include several photos.)
Restoration - $25 to $40 per photo.
Repair of larger scratches, marks, cracks, creases, and stains; adding text; simple object or persona removal; etc.
(includes correction)
Moderate restoration - $40 to $80 per photo.
Repairing seriously faded/damaged photographs. Repair of facial features, water spots or damage; extensive cracking or tearing or complicated placement of people, objects or background.
(Includes restoration)
Collages - individual estimates only.
Objects/people addition/removal, background modifications, edge/border effects, etc. It's possible to add a star to your photograph! Colorizing (adding color to a black & white photograph) - $5 per color (see below for a sample). For more than 10 colors, $3 for each additional color.

Here's my re-shuffling, editing, etc.

Order and Payment
Services, samples and prices. Photo restoration and design.
I restore damaged photos and perform photo designs all at exceptionally low prices.

Order
Send your photo to blabla@server.ru and I'll estimate it and reply to you. The size of the image sent must not exceed 1 Mb, have a resolution no greater than 600 dpi, and be saved in JPG format.

Payment
I accept bank transfer, Western Union, and e-gold. Your restored photo will be sent to you as soon as I receive payment. A low resolution picture or segment of your picture can be previewed, should you wish, prior to your payment.

All prices are estimates due to the nature of individual cases

Correction - $3 per operation
Resizing, red eye reduction, removal of small scratches from non-critical areas, adjust colors and contrast of the photograph to optimize the quality, and any other small correction..
(Minimum order - $15 and is not limited to one photo)

Restoration - $25 to $40 per photo
Repair of larger scratches, marks, cracks, creases, and stains, adding text, simple object or persona removal, etc.
(includes correction)

Moderate restoration - $40 to $80 per photo
Reparation of seriously faded/damaged photographs, of facial features, water spots or damage, extensive cracking, tearing or complicated placement of people, objects or background.
(Includes restoration)

Collages - individual estimation
Objects/persons addition/removal, background modifications, edge/border effects, etc.. Possible photos with stars. Colorizing (adding to color) - $5 per color (see down for sample).
After 10 colors have been selected an additional charge of $3 will apply to each additional colour.[/quote]

Subj!