Quote Originally Posted by n8m View Post
Correct language and sense mistakes, please. This letter I'll send to employer. What do you think about it?

"Hello, my name is Fyodor Khruschov and I'm going to be coming I'll come to the U.S america this summer from.... with three 3 my friends as J1 students. Under the J1 program, we can work legally in the U.S. and the employer is not required to document that we are not taking a job from a qualified American.

While there are no McDonald's restaurants in our town, the customer service and business reputation are well know. It's also known for allowing both young people and new immigrants a chance in the work place We've also heard about how McDonald's is a leader in your industry for reducing waste and carbon footprint by half.

My friends and I would very much like to learn about more McDonald's and their business and realize we would need to start from the bottom up and are willing to work hard. Would like to work on your team this summer.



You can contact me at .......

Thanks a lot.
because there are no such restaurants in our town. We'll accept all your requierements. Can we work with you this summer?

n8m.. I'm not certain I like what I've done with this... but it is the best I can think of right now. I'll try to look at it again later on or maybe someone else can edit my edits?