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Thread: Miss Foxy Sweet Cherry's Poetry Contest

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    Властелин Deborski's Avatar
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    Miss Foxy Sweet Cherry's Poetry Contest

    The rules:

    1. Your poem must NOT be in your native language.
    2. It must be a poem about MR
    3. All poems must conform to community standards (so don't be mean!)
    4. Winner will be determined by the number of "likes" each poem receives
    5. The winner gets to read their poem out-loud in our MasterRussian videochat at Google+
    6. All entries are allowed to fix grammatical mistakes
    7. You can enter as many poems as you like, but only one poem can win.


    *Hint: Do not try to make your poems to complicated. Write as if you are writing a children's poem.

    Example:

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I can write a poem
    And so can you

    ...and remember, everyone here is writing in a non-native language - so be gentle with us!

    PS: Пожалуйста, кто-нибудь, помогите с переводом!
    Вот потому, что вы говорите то, что не думаете, и думаете то, что не думаете, вот в клетках и сидите. И вообще, весь этот горький катаклизм, который я здесь наблюдаю, и Владимир Николаевич тоже…

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    And so I came back to my shell
    but found my wife with a pan
    I asked, "What the hell?"
    And there was a bang!
    My head started ringing like a bell
    and so I just fell
    I tried to stand up
    but the soul was already up
    Last edited by iCake; March 31st, 2013 at 02:06 AM.
    I do not claim that my opinion is absolutely true.
    If you've spotted any mistake in my English, please, correct it. I want to be aware of any mistakes to efficiently eliminate them before they become a habit.

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    I never want it to be that
    my English hurts me like a debt
    which should be paid
    untill I'm dead
    but any debt has got a maid
    who it's going to to fade
    but the maid is just unknown
    so I should bumble on my own
    untill I found who she is to be
    and finally squeal: "I'm free!"
    Tararwen and JamarriJa like this.
    I do not claim that my opinion is absolutely true.
    If you've spotted any mistake in my English, please, correct it. I want to be aware of any mistakes to efficiently eliminate them before they become a habit.

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    What do I think about iCake?
    I guess that's a thing I could probably make.
    It will be delicious and very big,
    But you'll never get it even if you're quick.
    Tararwen and Yulia65 like this.

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    The grammar was my sweetest dream
    But things don't look like they may seem
    Cuz no one bothers answering
    The question I've been asking

    I'll raise my hand and let it go
    And out the door i'll boldy go
    And speak just like I feel I should
    Cuz no one gives a flying sh!t
    Another month ends. All targets met. All systems working. All customers satisfied. All staff eagerly enthusiastic. All pigs fed and ready to fly.

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    Это как самовар
    Очень горячий
    И очень русский.
    Last edited by Molodets; March 31st, 2013 at 02:39 AM.

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    А что нам сказать о Паше?
    За чем говорить о Саше?
    Можно разсказ о Маше?
    О чем мне говорить дальше?
    Вот потому, что вы говорите то, что не думаете, и думаете то, что не думаете, вот в клетках и сидите. И вообще, весь этот горький катаклизм, который я здесь наблюдаю, и Владимир Николаевич тоже…

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    Здесь сидим мы у костра
    Весёлые, забaвные друзья
    Далеко живём мы в мире
    Но близко, как братьЯ
    Вот потому, что вы говорите то, что не думаете, и думаете то, что не думаете, вот в клетках и сидите. И вообще, весь этот горький катаклизм, который я здесь наблюдаю, и Владимир Николаевич тоже…

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    Do you feel worse day after day?
    Do you remember that you have to pay?
    Sleeplessness is your friend, am I right?
    So you are dreaming about some tide...

    Huh, you are learning Russian, I see.
    Maybe you would like a cup of good tea?
    You spent a few years for this weird case,
    But still can't say even a simple sentence.

    Your Russian verbs are not very well,
    Sure, I know, it's your personal hell.
    Strange thoughts visit your head, I bet,
    Stop it and welcome to masterrussian dot net!

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    Тут есть много людей.
    Они веселы, они умны,
    иногда они капризны.
    Не все иностранцы.
    Почти все всегда
    доброжелательны.

    Они израильтяне,
    американцы, немцы,
    французы, австралийцы,
    новозеландцы, венгры.

    Они фотографы,
    музыканты, студенты,
    врачи, писатели,
    мишки, киви-киви.

    Они из России,
    даже из Сибири.

    Со всех уголков мира.

    Даже из Антарктики
    возможно есть кто-то.

    А разнообразие
    это хорошо
    это красиво
    это прекрасно
    это отлично

    5th line edited 3/30/2013 7:25 P. M.
    Last edited by Tararwen; March 31st, 2013 at 02:26 AM. Reason: Wrong meaning

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    Ну ладно, мастера, постараюсь.

    По-русски должны узнать,
    Так важно,
    Совершенный или
    Несовершенный вид?
    Да, это вопрос!
    Текст без глаголов, круто!
    Наречные фразы, хорошо!
    Но, понять все невозможно!
    Ну, сюда приглашаем вас
    Участвуйте с нами и сияйте!
    Милости просим на МР!

    edit, add lines after Наречные фразы, хорошо!:

    Загадочные падежи? Хо-хо!
    Непонятные идиомы? Oh no!

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    В чате, мы пишем слова,
    слова о России, слова об Америке
    мы живем в разных странах,
    но у нас есть общая судьба,
    Мы рождаемся на земле,
    и на земле, мы умрем все.
    Last edited by Fester; April 1st, 2013 at 07:33 PM.

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    This is my first poem ever in my life. I am not a poem genious. I hope you will like it. xD

    ПОИСКИ
    Солнце на запад
    Великая любовь
    Она находится нигде
    Желаю я встретиться с ней
    Не знаю, когда я буду
    жду это я время
    Иди и учи русский!

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    У меня не очень с произношением, да и по смыслу получилось немного несвязно.
    Просто скажите, есть тут вообще рифма или нет?

    To be connected through some miles,
    We need the "Master Russian" site.
    Because all people are like brothers,
    Under the sun, that shines so bright.

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    Все на сайте оказались,
    Недавно познакомились.

    Вместе язык учим,
    Вместе зрение портим.

    Но быстро время летит,
    Надо будет расстаться,

    Хоть сердце так болит,
    Наш урок кончается.

    Дорогие друзья,
    Забыть вас нельзя.

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    As birds don't know about countries,
    (They feel free to fly in the sky.)
    So we don't care about borders.
    (We talk in chat from eye to eye)

    Я знаю что "borders" плохо рифмуется с "countries"

    Но,
    remember, everyone here is writing in a non-native language - so be gentle with us!

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    ГДЕ
    Могучая жизнь поменяла
    Её зовут свет-мощная и приятная
    Куда-то исчезнет она
    По её улыбке скучаю я
    Она как красивая и расслабляющая!
    А.А.Корол 2013 - Май
    Иди и учи русский!

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    We're all here!
    On MR mash!
    There's no other place, like MR salle!
    We do love each, We're on each other's back!
    We also have a General chat!
    Oh there's a troll!
    Lampada, where are you at?? =)
    On Friday's night we got a video chat!
    And who's the inventor?
    Yep, that's Deborah who stands!
    Chat's mod sometimes range!
    Paul was first, now Valda is our mod!
    In our chat, we got pretty traps!
    Lady is from France!
    Sasha's learning Français!
    No Alex! I don't wanna prank!
    You need a laugh?
    Ask our Molo, he got that!
    I have a Question!
    что это? Cake is here, Cake is there! Ask your question right away!
    You got a Tech prob babe? Write MA!
    We love Russia, We learn Russian!
    Don't bother with us, if you're a redneck who's learning Prussian!
    Roses are red, violets are blue! Master Russian is best!
    Thank you, we all knew=D


    ( And oh, Roses are red, violets are blue! We got so many contributers, But i couldn't represent them oll though! )
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    Let's Live By The Moment... Cause Together Ain't Promised Forever
    Жить надо так, чтобы тебя помнили и сволочи
    Du Vet Inte Vad Som Kan Hända Innan Aftonen!

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