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    Improvement of a sentence

    Можете ли пожалуйста помочь мне улучшить "стильно" следующее выражение на английский. Это because думаю не подходит:

    (V) Business Plan (Feasibility study)
    The creation of a business plan is not indispensable for the submission of the application. Nevertheless it is highly recommended that the form is accompanied with a sophisticated business plan because it enhances the elements that show the sustainability of the company. The sustainability of the subsidy receives that 1/3 of the grading during the assessment of the application.
    Чем больше слов, тем меньше они стоят.

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    The creation of a business plan is not indispensable for the submission of the application. Nevertheless it is highly recommended that the form is accompanied with a sophisticated business plan because it enhances the elements that show the sustainability of the company. The sustainability of the subsidy receives that 1/3 of the grading during the assessment of the application.
    "Because" is OK.
    The sustainability of the subsidy makes 1/3 of the overall application assessment grade.
    Контекст - (от лат. contextus - соединение - связь), относительно законченный отрывок письменной или устной речи (текста), в пределах которого наиболее точно выявляется значение отдельных входящих в него слов, выражений и т. п.

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