They didn't bother with the noise?
Cuz it happened in the morning on the next day and the pursuers must have been long gone.

Personally I would do that before I sleep. And also I'd tried to find some water to wash.
Good note

Did they take some food with them?
Oops!

Not to mention that some reprisals for a dead soldier should have taken place.
Doubtful, I think. The terrorists were in a hurry because they'd got a lot of things to do. War began, they had their own objectives and they must have been going to cut wires, attack headquarters and stuff. Not to play with a godforsaken village.

Ann could not possibly know the words 'kidding' or 'kinda' in 1941. They came into use much much later.
Okies

She's surprisingly well-informed for a rural linguist.
Look at who her mother is

Personally, I don't think she was able to giggle after all that had happenned the day before.
Okay, she will grin then

How will the a plane share is its fuel?
Oops, typo (its) and the plane was supposed to be the plane that would be carrying out the flight Peter would travel to the US.

Oh, don't worry, Peter. They both quite likely are dead by now.
Amen

P.S. Thanks for the corrections, I'm just at the beginning of 'polishing' my story. Renewed version will be available tomorrow.
I'll also post here the exerpts that I changed so that you don't have to bother rereading it.