Ok, Ramil.
I do need suggestions about the plot, style and wording as well, it's just that there is a difference between when I misuse something and when there are better options. The former is quite ok, I see it and I correct it without objections. As for the latter I try (at least I try) to estimate to understand the difference and if I see your thing is better than mine then I give it a go. If I don't see it, I don't use it either. Simple like that. So please do correct me, no matter whether I apply all of your corrections or just some of them.