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Don't. :-D Or else tomorrow indeed will never come. :) Besides, they probably don't know it exactly anyway.

I wrote all that to explain why I translated it that way. Basically, to do the same...

Sounds OK to me, but I'm not really a native speaker. (except in reality, as opposed to poetry. tomorrow always comes, not just happens. :) )

The problem here is the unusual phrasing of the...

Well, my "second opinion" is only that the English translation seems much more poetic than the original. :D

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Nah, my translation is a doggerel too. Rhymes are abysmal, meter is broken,...

Oopsie, no "you" in the original and without punctuation in the original , the ellipsis is a guess.

It's a poetry of sorts. Difficult to translate exactly but...

А завтра ведь может и не случиться
И сердца шепот оборвется
Так и не сказав люблю


What if tomorrow won't ever come
Then...